Burn (alternate)

8th Apr 2017, 10:00 AM

Burn (alternate)
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BUMBLEBEE on 8th Apr 2017, 10:00 AM

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This page, posted as an alternate, is what the original intent was for the last page (no zoom on the four panel series going down the left side). The intent was to show what it looks like moment to moment when a sabot round penetrates and then kills the tank via secondary explosions (typically by hitting ammo that subsequently ignites causing catastrophic fire). But I also wanted to show a crewman trying to escape, being overcome and burning, and I feel like you couldn't see him well enough in this series. But by zooming in, I feel like the first objective was not clear. I went back and forth on this until I ran out of time, and decided to post both and solicit advice. I hope you will compare the two pages and comment on this one which you think works better. Thanks in advance!

EDIT I screwed up and posted the wrong page first - all these comments refer to the NEXT page, not the PREVIOUS page. Sorry for the confusion.



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