Title Drop

25th Aug 2018, 4:00 PM

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BUMBLEBEE on 25th Aug 2018, 4:00 PM

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Let what just happen? Is Basher finally going to catch some heat for his inappropriate conduct? But why would Top want Newcom to intervene?



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Gerald Ney on 25th Aug 2018, 4:58 PM

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Considering that the CO couldn't have known this mess was going on, I'd say that he probably already has something else in mind about and/or for Basher.
I take note that Basher pulled this in sight of many of the men. The operative phrase is "detrimental to good order and discipline". If Newcom lets it go, her authority with her troops will be next to zero.

BUMBLEBEE on 25th Aug 2018, 6:44 PM

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Those guys are all first platoon, Basher's men. Even some of them are uncomfortable with this little stunt. It's way over the line. But if there was anyone from second platoon (Newcom's) this would have probably ended in violence. Whatever their opinion of her - and its probably not too high after cancelling their free time and making them work all night to get the tanks up - they wouldn't stand by while some other platoon humiliated their PL...

StLOrca on 27th Aug 2018, 11:26 PM

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I totally thought you were going to pull a “M. A. S. H.” and have the entire canvas wall roll up, revealing Newcom’s charms to all and sundry.

BUMBLEBEE on 28th Aug 2018, 5:20 PM

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Funny how things change... then, it was hilarious. Now it’s messed up. I guess it was messed up then, too we just didn’t realize it!

The way this scene was originally written, there was going to be a lot more exposure and humiliation. But when it came time to do it, I kind of felt sorry for her. She’s constantly been getting fucked with... I think it’s time to starting turning it around...

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